My Vacation
During the summer vacation, I had a wonderful time. I didn't have to focus on my study all the time. I spent some time in my study, but I also did a lot of other things. I visited my grandparents in the countryside. It was a completely different world from the city I live in. The air was fresh and the scenery was breathtaking. I spent most of my time playing with my cousins and exploring the beautiful fields, woods, and nearby. One day, we decided to go fishing in a nearby river. We woke up early in the morning, packed our things, and walked to the river. The sun was shining brightly, and the water was calm. We had a great time fishing and enjoying the nature.
Besides, I also helped my mother do some house work. I can reduce some burden of her and learn to be independent. In short, I had a good and rich holiday.
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